Hi Leilani, I really liked the work you did today. I think you did an awesome job on your story, I really liked the descriptive words you used. Great job Abby
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Hello Leilani,
ReplyDeleteI love how you made your rock buster. I was wondering what you made it out of?
Hi Amani,
DeleteI made my rock buster out of Tinfoil and some clear sellotape
Hi Leilani, I really liked the work you did today. I think you did an awesome job on your story, I really liked the descriptive words you used.
ReplyDeleteGreat job
Abby
Hey Abby, Thanks for the positive feedback :)
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