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Monday, 4 May 2020

May the fourth be with you...



Hi everyone thi was my work for today. It was so fun and I really loved writing the story and all the things I said in it is true, I did alot of researching about it so even the part about the great wall of china. I'm not a fan of star wars and i've never actually watched the movies before but I still enjoyed the work today. I learnt so so much today and I hope you learn something too.

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  1. Your diary recount is fantastic Leilani. I can tell you have researched and read a lot about the topic. It really feels like you are reading Neil's comments! Your maths is clear and completed to a high standard. Have you tried the extra maths yet? Your rocket is very cute!

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