Hi everyone today we learnt about chocolate it was really fun learning different things and facts about it. I hope you like looking at my work that i did and make sure to come back tomorrow to see what work i did. :)
Kia ora Leilani, I really enjoyed reading your story ending. You used specific vocabulary, giving your audience lots of information so they could really 'see' what was happening. I like your chocolate star shape and the stripy packaging, what kind of flavours might they be? Did you have a brand name? Good Maths practise, clearly set out. Did you try Tinkercad? A great day Leilani, fantastic effort.
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Kia ora Leilani, I really enjoyed reading your story ending. You used specific vocabulary, giving your audience lots of information so they could really 'see' what was happening. I like your chocolate star shape and the stripy packaging, what kind of flavours might they be? Did you have a brand name? Good Maths practise, clearly set out. Did you try Tinkercad? A great day Leilani, fantastic effort.
ReplyDeleteP.s I can't quite see your working for the Maths trick to check. Maybe you could check it with a calculator? Check your photos are clear next time.
ReplyDeleteHi Miss Ghent thank you for the nice comments I enjoy reading them.
DeleteWhich Math trick are you talking about?
Hi Leilani, slide 14, I just can't quite see. I wanted to see why it didn't work for you.
DeleteAwesome box Leilani you're very creative :)
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